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Expert answer:Edit and professor comment from a paper you wrote:professor : I have read through your paper, though not in enough detail to tell you your exact comment. I can say with confidence that the paper, as it stands, is somewhere between a B and B- (in the 82-86% range). I noticed problems in the paper that would be relatively easy to fix. First, you don’t provide any quotes from the gospel, and some of your statements need quotes to support them, or at the very least a citation (i.e. giving the citation for where Jesus says/does something without actually quoting it). Also, you mention the incident where Jesus prevents people from stoning the woman found in adultery. This, however, occurs in the Gospel According to John and not in the gospel of Matthew. Finally, you cite the Anchor Bible Dictionary, Encyclopedia of Religion, and Encyclopedia Judaica, but you don’t mention the names of the articles you are quoting. For the Anchor Bible Dictionary, you should also provide volume and page number. I’ll do a closer reading and get fuller comments and specific grade to you soon. Hopefully this will at least help you plan your time. ,<<><><><><><><><><><><><><<><>

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