Expert answer:White Privilege essay

Expert answer:Please only A+ work and little to no plagiarism.look at attachments for the paper with the prompt and such btw each paragraphs must be 10-16 sentences this is what the professor told me.look at attachments for the professor’s rubricI will attach the sources that will be usedThis is an easy essay, It would mean a lot if someone could help me get an A, please and thank youFinal Draft – Friday 15th Dec. 2017He does grade the first draft, If i could get a first drift before its due that would be splendidHere are the links to the sources:http://www.ywca.org/atf/cf/%7B6EDE3711-6615-4DDD-B…the sourced below was given to me by the teacher in one packet, this one all one sourceshttps://stuffwhitepeoplelike.com/2008/02/03/50-iro…https://stuffwhitepeoplelike.com/2008/05/06/98-the…https://stuffwhitepeoplelike.com/2008/08/18/107-se…https://stuffwhitepeoplelike.com/2008/07/20/104-un…https://stuffwhitepeoplelike.com/2008/02/03/49-vin…
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E NGL IS H : ES S A Y F E ED B ACK
Weak
Your introduction does not
have enough background
information and/or is
missing an attention-­­
getter.
One-­­word or below
average for college.
Your thesis contains a clear Your thesis statement
Your thesis statement
topic & assertion, and it
contains a clear topic &
might be confusing, or it
controls all the ideas in
assertion, and is it mostly doesn’t have a clear
your essay.
linked to the ideas in your assertion.
essay.
Poor
You do not have an acceptable
introduction.
Topic
sentences
You provide clear topic
sentences in each body
paragraph.
Topic sentences are missing.
Body
Paragraphs
You’ve composed plenty of
strong examples that
include concrete details
and explanations.
Introduction
Title
Thesis
statement
Paragraph
focus
Coherence
Logic
Grammar
Sentence
clarity
Punctuation
Spelling
Tone
Format
Writing
process
GRADE:
COMMENTS:
Excellent
Your introduction is
interesting and helpful.
Average
Your introduction is
somewhat interesting and
appropriate, but it could
use more background
information.
Interesting, clear, on-­­topic. Basic, on-­­topic.
You provide average topic It’s difficult to locate the
sentences.
topic in most body
paragraphs.
You provide average
examples that contain
some detailed support,
and you provide basic
explanations.
Each body paragraph
Each body paragraph
relates to the topic
relates to a topic sentence,
sentence and supports only but 1 or 2 off-­­topic
one point or reason.
examples occur.
Your essay contains
You’ve included some
effective transitions that
transitions that signal new
link your ideas together.
examples or additional
ideas.
Your points are easy to
Your points are basically
follow and they are distinct easy to follow, but one
from each other.
paragraph is unclear or
repetitive.
You have 0-­­3 frag, run-­­ons, You have 3-­­5 frag, run-­­ons,
comma splices, subject-­­
comma splices, subject-­­
verb agr. errors, and/or
verb agr. errors, and/or
shifts in verb tense.
shifts in verb tense.
It is easy to understand
Most of your word choices
your word choices, and
are easy to understand.
your writing is concise.
Zero errors
1-­­3 errors
Adequate
1-­­3 errors
Professional
Appropriate
Your essay is 3+ pages, and Your essay is 3 pages but
correctly formatted (MLA). not correctly formatted
(MLA).
You made substantive
You made some
revisions to your first draft. substantive revisions to
your first draft.
Your title is missing.
You do not have an
appropriate thesis statement.
It may lack an assertion, or it is
missing.
Examples are often not
specific enough and/or
there is not enough
support for your thesis.
Examples are vague, too short
and perhaps off topic.
Explanations that link to your
controlling idea are missing.
Most body paragraphs
relate to your topic but
contain irrelevant
statements or examples.
You’ve included a few
transitions, but you need
more within the
paragraphs.
Your points overlap
somewhat, and/or it was
slightly difficult to follow
your thinking.
You have over 5 frag, run-­­
ons, comma splices,
subject-­­verb agr. errors,
and/or shifts in verb tense.
The wording is unclear,
and/or many sentences are
not concise.
3-­­5 errors
3-­­5 errors
A little conversational in
places.
Your essay is not 3 pages.
Two or more paragraphs
contain off-­­topic statements,
lack focus or present tangents.
Transitions are missing.
It was difficult to understand
the reasoning in one or more
paragraphs.
There are too many grammar
errors that are distracting.
It is difficult to understand
many of the sentences.
5+ errors
5+ errors
Inappropriate or too informal.
Your essay is not 3+ pages or
not correctly formatted (MLA).
You made a few changes to You did not make any
your draft, but they were revisions or you did not turn in
not substantive.
preliminary drafts.
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