For this discussion question, find a sentence that is difficult… For this discussion question, find a sentence that is difficult to follow, and, using some of the techniques in the handouts on writing more clearly, revise the sentence so it is easier to read. Be sure to tell us* the original sentence* the source of the sentence* the revised sentence* the technique (from the files) you used to revise the sentenceHere’s an example:Original sentence:The department is planning to conduct, between November 26 and 30, its eighth annual seminar for criminal investigators during which individuals who have amassed considerable knowledge in their respective fields of knowledge will be invited to participate as instructors.Source: Department of Police, Frederick, MDRevised sentence:Between November 26 and 30 our department will hold its eighth annual seminar for criminal investigators. We will invite experts in their fields to be instructors.Techniques used:* write more like you talk* read your paper out loud* use personal pronouns* write shorter sentencesArts & Humanities English ENGL 103
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