Expert answer:Final Draft

Expert answer:The final draft of the essay should be 1,000-1,200-words and include a thesis, all major points, evidence to support these points (including in-text citations), counterclaims, and a Works Cited page. The final draft will reflect significant revisions based upon instructor and peer feedback.You will generate an arguable claim and write a 1,000-1,200 word academic essay to support that claim, based on the following requirements:present your arguable claim in your thesisprovide background on the topicuse evidence to support your claimexplain counterarguments and refute them to support your claimoffer a conclusion that underscores why your argument matters within a larger contextThis essay prepares you to compose the type of research-based academic writing that you will be asked to do throughout your academic career. ” I already did the outline so based on the outline you write the final draft , And please see the instructor feedback and try to make it your goal ” there is 2 files. the first is the outline and the second is the feed back.
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I. Introduction
A. Some international students face Psychological problems. These problems can affect
their success. for example, anxiety, temperament, and stress-related disorders.
These can affect international students ‘ working over different spaces, including the
scholarly world.
B. Loneliness can be a serious problem for one’s life, However, could it affect the
student success?
Some psychological and social problems can affect the success of a student.
loneliness in particular can affect the student grade and participation.
II. Body Paragraphs
A. Loneliness is a piece of the human condition. Everybody encounters it. It might
be caused by conditions that are anything but difficult to recognize,
B. Evidence
1. Bek, H. (2017). Understanding the effect of loneliness on academic
participation and success among international university students. Journal of
Education and Practice, 8(14), 46-50.
The purpose of this study was to assess the effect of loneliness on academic
participation and success among 213 students studying at Usak University.
2. Korobova, N. Starobin, S. (2015). A comparative study of student
engagement, satisfaction, and academic success among international and american
students. Journal of International Students, 5(1), 72-85.
This study examines the relationship between student engagement and the
academic success of international and American students.
The main argument for the both of these sorsues is students with higher life
goals and social engagement are more involved in course activities. increase of life
goals means a decrease in loneliness.
III. Conclusion paragraphs
A. The main argument for the both of these sorsues is students with higher life
goals and social engagement are more involved in course activities. increase
of life goals means a decrease in loneliness.
B. International students are more vulnerable for loneliness and lack of
engagement and that can affect their success. international students and their
families burning through cash on everyday costs, educational cost and fees
That can boost the economy and create jobs. In order for that to happen the
U.S. have to ensure the success of the international students. There is some
solutions*.
ANALYSIS Ok you have narrowed down to a specific concern and are currently arguing that
loneliness is a factor in student success. Can you take this a step further and shift your
thesis toward some possible solutions or ways to address this? Can you localize it to a
specific population or institution?
EVIDENCE By only providing two sources that make similar arguments, you’re not giving me a lot to
go on. So these sources agree with what you’re saying, that’s good. But you need to
find a counterargument. You also need to focus on how people that agree (like Bek and
Korobova) might disagree on the proper ways to combat loneliness
ORGANIZATION You’ve only given me one topic sentence. It previews the paragraph but doesn’t
necessarily support your thesis.
FORMAT Be sure to choose a formatting guide (MLA or APA) that is appropriate to your major.
For help generating citations, visit Knightcite.com. If you’d like a resource that locates
source citations for you, try worldcat.org. Finally, for help creating citations on your own,
check out the MyReviewers Community Comments Textbook on your sidebar,
writingcommons.org or OWL Purdue.
ENDNOTE You weren’t the only person to follow the outline exactly and provide only one topic
sentence, so I’m being lenient with that. But I did expect to see a counterargument
present as well as a bit more detail about what these sources help you accomplish in
your argument. I think by adding the solution question to your research and finding
counterarguments for that solution will greatly improve this draft
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