Expert answer:Editing Exercise
Expert answer:Editing Exercise 4 Grammar mistakes 1 Capitalization mistakes 2 Punctuation mistakes
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8. Time for Fun
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We plan to see the shows while we ts
at Fun Park, Idaho. We notice on the
schedule that •the~d animal show will
_ be given at lljpO A.M. and 2:00 P.M. The
i.~ird show is in the
~arena next to the
animal show and-w~ be presented at
10:00 AM. and 1:00 P.M. We really want;stto
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see °Wyattl.s Wj.ld West St11nt Show on the
other side of the park.A .We
can
see
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animal
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~·show at 10:00. Then we can take a break
~ for 111nch and go to the stunt show at ·
· 1t=’60 ·Jt:·M; On the other hand, we can see
the st11nt show first, the bird show next, .
and the animal show last. An:yway, we
will”‘ha v”irrg seen them all by the da:y~s end.
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11 :00 A.M.
2:00 P.M.
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SHOW SCHEDU
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Bird Show
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Stunt Show r
10:00 A.M•
1 :00 P.M.
11 :00 A.M.
1 :00 P.M.
LOCATION
Large Arena
Small Arena
Frontier Town
Stage
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Anirna Exhibit
We expect to see all the shows at Fun Park and are
using the schedule to organize our time.
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