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Outline
Give Undocumented Immigrants a Path to Citizenship
I.
Introduction
Since 1990, the number of immigrants living in the United States has increased
exponentially. Last presidency candidate based his entire campaign on immigration
and the penalty of such act. On the other side, immigrants are just trying to keep their
heads down and provide for their families.
a. Statistics on Illegal Immigration
1. Contrary to popular belief, Mexico is not the primary source of illegal
immigrants entering the U.S.
2. Immigrants come from all around the world and countries in Central America
and Asia are huge contributors to immigration.
b. Immigrants being the source of violence in the country
1. Only about 2.7% or immigrants have been convicted of a felony or crime.
2. U.S citizens believe that a lot of the gun violence, robberies and criminal acts
executed on U.S soil come from illegal immigrants.
c. Immigrants are the reason behind unemployment
1. U.S citizens believe that most “good jobs” are no longer available because
illegal immigrants have taken them.
2. On the other side, statistics say that the farming and construction occupations
are overrepresented by illegal immigrants, which most of the time, are jobs
that citizens are not willing to take.
d. Immigration affecting the economy of the nation
1. The U.S workforce includes 8 million illegal immigrants.
2. The available evidence suggests that immigration usually leads to U.S citizens
occupying better positions and more innovation and better matching of skills
with jobs.
II.
Conclusions
Although, illegal immigration has increased throughout the years and recently stopped
increasing, illegal immigrants are just trying to have a better life and thus, without their
knowledge helping U.S educated citizens get better positioned jobs and helping the economy.
Persuasive Writing Rubric
Ideas
4 The thesis
statement is
clear. Evidence
is solid, and
there are no
logical fallacies.
Rebuttals are
effective.
3 The thesis
statement is
clear. Most
evidence is solid,
and there are no
logical fallacies.
Some rebuttals
are effective.
2 The thesis
statement could
be clearer. Some
evidence is solid,
but there is one
logical fallacy.
Rebuttals are
weak.
Organization
4 The organization
is clear and easy
to
follow. Transitions
provide
coherence.
4 The voice
sounds natural,
engaging, and
forceful.
3 The
organization
is clear, but a
few ideas seem
out of place or
disconnected.
3 The voice
sounds natural
and engaging.
2 Many ideas
seem out of
place and
transitions are
missing.
4 Words are
specific and
powerful.
Language is
respectful.
4 Varied
sentences
flow smoothly.
Sentences vary
in structure and
length.
4 Punctuation,
usage, and
spelling
are correct and all
Power Rules are
followed.
3 Words are
specific and
language is
respectful.
Voice
Word Choice
Sentence Fluency
Conventions
1 The thesis
statement is
missing or
unclear. Some
evidence is solid,
but there are
logical fallacies.
No rebuttals are
offered.
1 The
organization
is unclear and
hard to follow.
2 The voice
sounds mostly
natural but is
either weak
or overly
bombastic.
2 Some
words are too
general and/or
emotional.
1 The voice
sounds mostly
unnatural and is
inappropriate.
3 Most of the
sentences are
varied and flow
smoothly.
2 Some sentence
patterns are not
varied and some
sentences are
choppy.
1 Sentences
are not varied
and are
choppy.
3 There are only
a few errors in
punctuation,
usage, and
spelling and
no Power Rule
errors.
2 There are
several errors
in punctuation,
usage, and
spelling and
no Power Rule
errors.
1 There are
many errors
and at least
one Power
Rule error.
1 Most words
are overly
general and
emotional.
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